Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Comments for Lomina and Bosteya: Diana Nyad

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16 comments:

  1. The presentation incorporated facts and details about Diana, which was helpful in understanding more about her. Before this presentation I had never hear of her, so I did learn something interesting. I also liked how you expressed your opinion and how you think she is a brave women.

    For a criticism I would say that you should read off of the screen less and focus more on the audience while presenting.

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  2. I liked the quotes that you used and the documentary that you used to show us her.
    One thing that you could have done was make your arguments clearer as to why she was a visionary.

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  3. I learned a lot from your presentation especially because I had never heard of Diana Nyad before. I thought that you guys had a lot of really good and interesting facts. I thought that the map you showed of her attempts swimming from Cuba to Florida was really interesting!

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  4. I really liked the video and it made me really consider watching the full documentary as she was a really interesting person/

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  5. The presentation was good and I learn a lot of new informations about Diana Nyad. I think the video was interesting and your guys doing a good job. I think your guys should look at the audience while you presenting and not just read the infos from power point.

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  6. Before your presentation, I had never heard of Diana Nyad. The video you two showed was a very good video to share with us because it was filled with details and it was extremely interesting to watch. I think it is really cool how much she did and made swimming a very big part of her life because of her past. I think you two could have done better by talking to us and not reading off the screen as much as you did. But you two did a good job!

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  7. I learned who she was and I really liked how you talked about her swim from Florida to Cuba and how many times she tried it and I also liked the video you showed as well.

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  8. I never knew who Diana was until the presentation. It was really interesting to learn about her, and the documentary you guys showed was very good, and showed how she was a passionate swimmer.

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  9. The presentation was overall good and including a lot of facts about Diana. The short clip helped me understand more of her story. The only negative I saw was directly reading off the board.

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  10. I enjoyed watching the documentary. I thought it explained a lot and we also got to learn something new things about her. Something i thought you could have done better was to talk louder when presenting and not looking at the slides and reading from it that much.

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  11. I'd never heard of Diana Nyad but now I know her from this presentation. Your presentation was great. I like the video because it has lot of information. I know her that she is an American motivational speaker, and long-distance swimmer

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  12. I really like persentation especially the video but you guys didn't had the conclusion. However you guys did good job.

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  13. Nyad is a very inspiring person and I am glad you guys chose to present her because ive been meaning to learn more about her life story. Thats very sad she was raped but its awesome how she used that to motivate her.

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  14. I really enjoyed your presentation on Diana Nyad. I learned a lot from your presentation. I learned that she swam from Cuba to Florida and she swam 48 hours to benefit Hurricane Sandy victims. I think you could have polished the compare and contrast part of the presentation. I thought you could have done a better job talking to the audience and keeping eye contact.

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  15. I liked how you incorporated a short clip about Diana, it was a great way to show the audience her personality.

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  16. i always heard who diana nyad was, but i did not who she really was . i really learn about your presentation it was really good.

    if she is that famouse i thought you guys should had many informations about her,but over all you guys did a great job.

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