Thursday, April 3, 2014

Comments for Jai and Naman: Steve Wozniak

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18 comments:

  1. I like how your guy's presentation was about Steve Wozniak instead of Steve Jobs, because most do not know about Wozniak. Your guy's comparison with Apple and Android was good, especially since today a lot of people favor Apple products. I also liked how you two stated that Wozniak always looked forward to [creating] something new. It showed his dreams and ambitions.

    One thing I would improve on, would have been to make a connection with Steve Jobs, and show Wozniak's place in Apple better. Other than that, I found nothing wrong with your guys' presentation. Good job!

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  2. I think that you guys had a lot of really good information about Steve and it was all relevant to why he was a visionary. I also liked the video because it showed us him as a person and we got to see him talk and how excited he was all the time.

    One thing that you could've done differently was put why he was a visionary in the beginning of your presentation so that we knew what you were getting at with your information.

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  3. i really liked the ways you guys had a great eye cantact with people. i think you guys did a great job. i really liked the video he can dance.

    over all guys project was great but i feel that you guys would had more information.

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  4. I think you guys had presentation experience it was really good how you describe everything and you guys showed us what I didn't know about steve

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  5. I think your presentation went very well and I like how your guys talk louder and speak to the audience. It is first time that I know there is another guys who is famous that work in Apple rather than Steve jobs. I think your guys should talk about little more his relationship between Steve jobs and Apple. The comparison of android should be more specific. Over all, your guys do a great job!

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  6. I really enjoyed your presentation! I thought that both of you knew your information well. The only thing that I would have done differently was talked more about Steve Wozniak's connection to Apple more, and what exactly he did for Apple. I thought you both did really well! Good job!

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  7. I think you guys did a really good job and it was clear he was a visionary based on all the information you provided, I found it really interesting how he was kind of the mastermind behind apple.

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  8. I think you guys did a great job and the only thing I like to most is how you guys explain. The only thing I will like to hear about him is what is Stave job and apple. however you guys did amazing job.

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  9. It's a great presentation. You guys presented loudly and clearly to audience and you both share time too. In your presentation I like your video and information. I’d no idea that Wozniak designed the Apple computers and he is an American electronics engineer. I think you should talk more about his work in apple like how did he invent the program.

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  10. I liked how you did a presentation on Wozniac rather than Jobs. Prior to this presentation I didn't know who Wozniac was, so I found the presentation interesting. Including the comparison was a good idea! The only thing I saw a need for improvement was Wozniac and Jobs relationship through it all.

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  11. i liked your presentation. I never knew who created apple on till you guys did a presentation on him. Great work.

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  13. Your presentation on Steve Woznaik was very interesting. I did not know a lot about Wozniak before your presentation. I really enjoyed your comparison with Apple and Android. Many people have different opinions on these products. I also liked how you mentioned that Wozniak created Apple l and Apple ll. One thing you could have improved on was to compare Wozniak with Steve Jobs a little bit more and Woznaik’s impact on Apple. Altogether I found your presentation great. Great job guys!

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  14. You guys chose an interesting guy to present. I didn't know much about him prior to your presentation. Good job explaining his impact on Apple and his pursue as a musician. I didn't know that Woznaik left Apple to pursue in music, that was interesting to me. The video was a great way to show the audience who he was as a person.

    I think that you could've compared Woznaik to Job's a bit more, and discussed his career with android.

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  15. You two had a very interesting presentation! I loved that you two chose Steve Wozniak because when I though of Apple before your presentation, I automatically thought of Steve Jobs so it was nice to learn about Steve W.I liked the quotes you shared as well as your comparison to Android. My favorite part of your presentation was the video of Steve on Dancing with the Stars. It showed a humorous side of him instead of a serious, business side.

    One thing you could have worked on was just speaking a little slower at some parts. Some words seemed jumbled but besides that, you two did a really good job and your presentation was very good!

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  16. You two did very well on your presentation. One thing that stood out to me is you spoke clearly and were loud so we could all hear. I liked the first quote you used before the presentation ever started. I thought it was a good touch and really helped me understand who Steve was as a person.
    One thing I would say you guys could work on it the actually look of your slides. But overall it was a really good presentation!

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  17. I really enjoyed your guys presentation Steve Wozniak because I recently watched a documentary on Apple about its upcoming and so on and they barely talked about Wozniak and mostly talked about Steve Jobs. So, I was excited to learn more about Woz and his influence on Apple which was pretty profound apparently. I though your presentation was the best when you guys elaborated on his earlier years when he was helping develop the first two apple computers. My only constructive criticism was the comparison of Apple and Android, you guys stated no facts just opinions.

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  18. It was really inspiring learning about Steve Wozniak. I have never really heard of him. it was really fun learning that he was a goofy guy in college. What i really love watching was the video of him dancing with Karina in the dancing with the stars. Something else that i liked was the comparison to Steve Jobs.

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