Thursday, April 3, 2014

Comments for Chloe and Amal: Annie Leibowitz

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16 comments:

  1. In your presentation, I liked how you two addressed that Leibowitz captured people in her photography. That she captured emotion, personality, and character of people and used that to express that person. The fact that she photographed certain celebrities and political figures showed that she always wanted to expand on her dreams of reaching out to more people.

    I would improve on organization in your presentation, and plan a little better, but other than that, your presentation was good.

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  2. on you presentation it was really interesting I like when she said the book told me
    a number of stories and that with susan it was a love story.i really enjoyed you presentation

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  3. I thought it was really interesting she took the last known picture of John Lennon, it could maybe have been organized better but it was good.

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  4. I think the PowerPoint has a lot of informations that I never knew before. The pictures are pretty interesting and it's very unique. I think your really explain why she is a visionary through her life, her works, and her personality. The comparison with the guy was pretty good. I think your guys should plan the organization little bit and it will help your presentation went more well!

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  5. I really enjoyed your presentation and your presentation topic. I had never heard of Annie Leibowitz before, so I learned a lot and I thought she was a good pick for this project. I thought that you both knew your information very well. The only place that I saw room for improvement was knowing your presentation better. Other than this I think you guys did really well. Good job!

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  6. I learn many interesting thing your presentation and you guys did amazing work. I had heard Annie Leibowitz before in photograph class. But I didn't that much I learn your presentation, and hopefully you guys learn many interesting too. good job.

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  7. In your presentation I like the pictures which are beautiful and unique. I had no idea the she is photographer because in my photographing class I studied many different famous photographer but I didn't study about her but in your presentation I knew her little bit. You guys had lot of information about her and why she is visionary and you also compared with another person was also good. I think you should improve in your talking otherwise it’s a good presentation.

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  8. Overall this was a good presentation that provided a lot of information. I learned a lot about her and it you guys made it interesting. I think you guys could of improved on your organization for the presentation.

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  9. Great presentation guys. I liked all the pictures you presented it really showed how good she is at what she does.

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  10. I had no idea who Annie was until you guys provided me with some information. you guys did really good job, and cover mostly everything that needed to be covered. one thing you guys need to work on was what she did when she came to OSU.

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  11. Prior to this presentation I had no clue who she was. I learned a lot from this.

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  12. Before this presentation I never knew anything about Annie Leibowitz, and I learned a lot about her from you guys. I really enjoyed the photographs Leibowitz took, it was very interesting. I learned Leibovitz was a photographer and took a lot of pictures of celebrities. I like the John Lenno photograph because it has so much meaning behind it. I also enjoyed your comparison slide with Richard Avedon. One place I found for improvement knowing your parts in the presentation and eye contact. Other than that, your presentation was good. Great Job!

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  13. I like how you guys included Leibowitz photographs as apart of the presentation. I could see her style of photography. The photo of John Lennon stood out to me most. I learned that in that photo, Leibowitz was trying to captured Lennon and Ono love for each other.

    You guys have room for improvement in speaking equally, despite that, I found your presentation to be informative and interesting.

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  14. I loved the information and facts I learned from your presentation! Before your presentation, I had no clue who Annie Leiboritz was but I learned a lot from your presentation. I absolutely loved the Rolling Stone pix she did! It was really cool to learn about a photographer because I do not know much in that area.

    Something you two could have worked on was splitting the presentation up a little more. But overall I really enjoyed your presentation and learned a lot from it. Really good job you two!

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  15. I thought your slides were very good at informing us but not overwhelming us with information! You both spoke very clearly and did a great job. I liked how you showed different pictures that she did. I really learned what kind of style of photographer she was.
    I thought maybe something you could change was dividing the presentation up a little better. But other then that you two did great!

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  16. I agree with Molly I really liked how you guys didn't overload us with information on each slide about Annie Leibowitz. I liked who you guys presented because she is very different and I enjoyed learning about someone new. I am a big John Lennon fan and that was cool to learn that she was the last person to take a professional photograph of him. I thought your presentation was at its best when you guys would talk about her work because that is obviously what she is known for. I have no constructive criticism for you guys, did awesome!

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