Thursday, April 3, 2014

Comments for Azia and Christian

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16 comments:

  1. Your guys' presentation on Jimi Hendrix was good, and I liked how you two talked about his influence on musicians today. Additionally, I was intrigued when you mentioned that Hendrix was the first to reinvent the Star Spangled Banner, on an electric guitar - I never knew that before, so I found that quite interesting. I also like how you two proved that he revolutionized music, demonstrating his visions and change in music.

    One thing I would improve on, would have to be to have equal speaking parts in the presentation. But overall your presentation was good and informative.

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  2. I really liked the videos that you guys put in your presentations because i think it gave people a good sense of how he played and why he would be such an impact on the music world.

    One thing that you could have done was talk a little bit louder and make more eye contact with the audience.

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  3. i really like the quets that you guys had given in your presentation i think they had really had meaning.

    you guys presentation was great but i wished you guys had talk a little bit louder becouse i was sitting at all the way in the back.

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  4. I like you presentation you guys explained well and I also like the
    photo you put in you presentation it really make sense that.

    you could have talk louder little bit because I couldn't hear you on that much overall you guys did great job.

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  5. Before I saw your presentation, I never know Jimi and now I know a lot about him. I like how your guys talk about his early life and how is his father and other musicians influence him. The comparison was pretty good. The video is great that shows his music. One thing I want recommend is, the organization of the speaking should be plan more little it and Azia should talk little bit louder. Overall, your guys do a great job!

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  6. I really learned a lot from your presentation! I like how during the videos that you guys showed you explained to us what we should have been noticing. I thought that you both knew his music well. The only thing that I would have practiced more would be not reading as much from your cards. I really enjoyed your presentation and learned a lot from it. Good job!

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  7. I thought your presentation was really good, I didn't know much about Jim Hendrix as I don't really listen to that kind of music, but it seems like he was a really influential guy. One thing I would improve would be making a little more eye contact.

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  8. Amazing job. I hate listen music but you guys did nice work. The video amazing too and the way explain.

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  9. I'd never known who is Jimi Hendrix. After your presentation I knew about him that he's an American musician and he is one of the most influential electric guitarists in the history of popular music. I like that you guys proved that how is he a visionary person and I also like the video which shows his music. I think Azia should talk more because he talked less when Christian talked more in presentation. It's a great presentation.

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  10. Providing the videos really helped me get a better understanding of Jimi Hendrix and who he was. Overall this was a great presentation! The only thing I saw that went wrong was reading off your cards so much.

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  11. i liked you guys presentation, it was really interesting and the guy was really interesting. I like the way he played his quitter with his teeth and also his style of music is very different.

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  12. the video you guys showed in class was really great and made me really understand you Jimi Hendrix was.

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  13. I really liked your presentation, the best thing I liked about it was your video. I also liked your comparison slide as well.

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  14. I think you two had a really cool presentation. Besides all the interesting info, I really enjoyed the video clips you two shared! I think it was a really good idea because we got to see how talented and so different Jimi Hendrix was. We don't see talent like his everyday so I really enjoyed the video clips and info you provided to us.

    One thing you two could have worked on was speaking louder. Some parts were hard to understand because they were not presented loud enough. Overall, you two did a good job!

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  15. You guys did a very good job on your presentation. You both made really good eye contact. In addition too I like the video you put in. It really helped me understand the actual techniques he uses.
    One thing that I thought you two could improve on was being a little bit more organization. But other then that the presentation was great!

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  16. I thought I knew a good amount about Jimi Hendrix so thats why I was excited to learn that he would sometimes play the guitar with his teeth/tongue. My roommate is a huge Hendrix fan and I was pumped to tell him that and he had no idea about that either so great information! My only constructive criticism would be to speak louder to the group. Also, there was alot of information on each slide which made it hard to follow. Other than that great presentation!

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