tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post421454567774743350..comments2014-04-22T17:09:24.764-07:00Comments on Writing To Discover and Share: Comments for Sudi and Najma: Coco ChanelMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-16057128360020030672014-04-08T05:16:23.446-07:002014-04-08T05:16:23.446-07:00I thought you guys presentation was really good be...I thought you guys presentation was really good because it wasn't someone that i knew. it was so interesting learning that she came up with the channel #5 perfumes.<br />i think you guys could have done a much better job of going into details about her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08157376963226871116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-32900535289568736352014-04-08T04:10:54.183-07:002014-04-08T04:10:54.183-07:00I thought you guys did a good job presenting on Co...I thought you guys did a good job presenting on Coco Chanel and her life story. I was very interested because I had no idea who Coco Chanel was, i just thought it was a clothing line but now I know that it was a woman. I was surprised to learn that she was as successful as she was during the time she was a designer because women had to work much harder than men and seeing how successful she was is inspiring. <br /><br />Is there constructive criticism that would help this group?My only constructive criticism would be louder and speak clearly. I know english is not your guys native language and if I had to do a presentation in a non-native language I wish I could do as good as you guys did! It could have been more clear about how Coco got into designing clothes. The powerpoint could of used some polishing up, make it simpler. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17925776150031379700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-55646031787225258452014-04-08T03:59:03.828-07:002014-04-08T03:59:03.828-07:00You did a great job at explaining Coco Chanel. I n...You did a great job at explaining Coco Chanel. I never realized how inspirational she really is. I loved how you put in how she affects women. She is a great influence to women which I think I learning during your presentation. The pictures of the handbags and different things she sold was a nice touch to see how pretty her work was!<br /><br />One thing I feel that you guys could work on is standing more towards the screen so it was easier to see you. Other then that I really like your presentation!Molly Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16470930722859520756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-42770994247295664342014-04-07T20:12:12.037-07:002014-04-07T20:12:12.037-07:00I really enjoyed your presentation of Coco Chanel!...I really enjoyed your presentation of Coco Chanel! Your presentation was filled with info and interesting quotes! I loved the amount of pictures you two used to show us her vision and how she made it come to life. I also thought your comparison to Tom Ford was an awesome choice! <br /><br />One thing you could have worked on was just talking a little louder. But besides that, i LOVED your presentation! Good job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09232424056423034832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-88658869044743681362014-04-07T17:17:31.940-07:002014-04-07T17:17:31.940-07:00You did a good job explaining what Coco Chanel'...You did a good job explaining what Coco Chanel's dream and vision was. It was clear to me right from the start, and I also liked the use of pictures. The pictures helped me visualize the style of clothing. <br /><br />Next time, I would try to improve on the organization and speaking louder to the audience. Despite the minor flaws, I enjoyed your presentation. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16798112390082490437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-81972712753438291232014-04-07T16:11:20.483-07:002014-04-07T16:11:20.483-07:00I really enjoyed your presentation on Coco Chanel....I really enjoyed your presentation on Coco Chanel. Your presentation was very informative. I learned that she is a famous designer. I really liked the quotes especially “fashion passes, style remain.” You guys did a great job explaining her impact on society and her dreams. One area of improvement is to depend less on the PowerPoint and interact more with the audience. Overall the presentation was great. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08677177508710600719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-13273709659596476632014-04-07T13:45:57.676-07:002014-04-07T13:45:57.676-07:00i think that your presentation was really good and...i think that your presentation was really good and rally showed how coco channel came to be. <br />the one thing you guys needed to work on was being organized, and having more information how cox channel changed the world, or she was a visionary person.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14558276290829300579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-62813361122776196862014-04-07T13:33:48.407-07:002014-04-07T13:33:48.407-07:00You guys did a good job on your presentation and I...You guys did a good job on your presentation and I liked your comparison. I learned a lot of interesting things about coco Chanel Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06336044130095786744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-4884427130898535712014-04-06T16:05:49.120-07:002014-04-06T16:05:49.120-07:00You guys did a great job on this presentation and ...You guys did a great job on this presentation and did a good job on explaining her dreams. I knew who about her prior to the presentation but didn't understand her work until after the presentation. Very informative! The only problem I saw was you guys talked quietlyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01468647874176113338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-25299509032891334752014-04-06T14:55:48.737-07:002014-04-06T14:55:48.737-07:00First of when I heard Coco Chanel I thoughts it’s ...First of when I heard Coco Chanel I thoughts it’s a kind of a TV channel. I wouldn’t think it’s a person’s name. I had never heard a person’s name Chanel. But after your presentation I knew that she is a fashion designer and founder of the Chanel brand. I like all the information about her you guys presented. I also like all the pictures in your power point. It’s a good presentation. I think you should talk more and loudly with good eye contacts towards to audience. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18111194582254728580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-64379533780096803072014-04-04T11:07:41.764-07:002014-04-04T11:07:41.764-07:00I think that you guys did a great job with your pr...I think that you guys did a great job with your presentation and I thought it was really interesting! I thought that you guys had a good comparison. The only place where I saw improvement could have been made was practicing not reading straight from your slides. I really enjoyed your presentation!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16466427078095902483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-14283767348329602032014-04-04T10:05:08.376-07:002014-04-04T10:05:08.376-07:00I think your presentation went very well and I lik...I think your presentation went very well and I like your power point. The power point is very useful and I understand a lot of informations from your power point. The pictures of the Coco Chanel is very useful in this presentation and also the pictures of the products that I think it relate to why she is visionary and she is a very creative women. One thing I think your guys should be speak little bit louder and make more eye contact to the audiences! Overall, your guys did a great job.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18260894234380708195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-68278595573792737732014-04-03T20:25:23.077-07:002014-04-03T20:25:23.077-07:00I liked the part where you said she wanted to make...I liked the part where you said she wanted to make clothing more comfortable, making a change. I also think your connection was very good. I think you could talk a bit louder it was good though.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12857205555064261680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-55218262274999829162014-04-03T15:36:08.318-07:002014-04-03T15:36:08.318-07:00You guys did a great job and I like how you showed...You guys did a great job and I like how you showed us her latest fashion but you were little bit shy anyway it was good the presentationAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11983321547019670414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-20523693731908194642014-04-03T12:58:09.420-07:002014-04-03T12:58:09.420-07:00You guys did a good job of showing us Coco's d...You guys did a good job of showing us Coco's dream and her work that she did. I also thought that your conclusion was a good ending to your presentation. But I think that you could have improved on your Organization of the presentation and not relay on the slides so much.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01868408267088383280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6138203380810327743.post-42650182677259608172014-04-03T07:49:24.925-07:002014-04-03T07:49:24.925-07:00You two explained Chanel's dreams for fashion ...You two explained Chanel's dreams for fashion and I liked how you said that her goal was to make women's fashion more comfortable and more simple. She made a huge influence on women's fashion because of her unique style and innovations. Additionally, you had good visuals and photographs, showing us some of her products. <br /><br />I would improve on clarity and organization in our presentation, but overall it was good. <br /><br /> Zachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09927292314200512186noreply@blogger.com